One spooky day at Drew College Preperatory, a young boy named Isaac was finishing up his homework in the photography classroom. Once he finished, he made one last look around to make sure he didn't forget anything. He then turned off the lights and walked out of the classroom. A couple of seconds later he realized that he left his backpack cramped under Mr. Whiton's desk. As he walked back into the classroom to retrieve it, a mysterious figure stood before him. Isaac was in deep shock when he discovered this figure. Where did it come from? So Isaac immediatly ran out the door and today still doesn't believe that actually happened.
One spooky day at Drew College Preperatory, a young boy named Isaac was finishing up his homework in the photography classroom. Once he finished, he made one last look around to make sure he didn't forget anything. He then turned off the lights and walked out of the classroom. A couple of seconds later he realized that he left his backpack cramped under Mr. Whiton's desk. As he walked back into the classroom to retrieve it, a mysterious figure stood before him. Isaac was in deep shock when he discovered this figure. Where did it come from? So Isaac immediatly ran out the door and today still doesn't believe that actually happened. 
I really like how the images flow together really smoothly. The black frame around each image definitly adds to the "spooky" element.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy yout story and like how just by looking at the pciture u ca tell whast going on. My favorite one is the last pic with issac seeing the ghost int eh darkness. flows nicely:)
ReplyDeleteI echo the comments from Beckett and Zaina- very strong flow. Has a movie scene vibe, and the sequential arrangement and choice of b&w with dark edges ties them together (and supports the Halloween vibe). The story might be more chilling as a short poem- something that suggest an unexpected encounter. Like in Alien, the scary thing is more scary if we know or see less of it.
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